There’s a degree of palpable anxiety in the air.
The release date of the new Outliers volume is fast approaching and we’re perhaps 85% the way to complete. Much of what’s left is primarily grunt work: formatting, administrative, distributive. Being an editor for the project has me weighing in on techniques and methods to improve my writers’ skills. A great deal of the process boils down to something like this:
Step 1: The writer is tired and not as stoked because their creative energy was invested in writing the synopsis. They start writing.
Step 2: In the rush to finish it (and get to mentally rest), the writer blindly cranks out the first draft. The draft is never great, because in their haste, they:
- overlook redundant sentences or even whole paragraphs
- misuse form/from, pubic/public and other spell checker-immune horrors
- forget to add a somewhere (hint: reread that)
- use the same words, phrases and grammatical approaches too often
- leave scenes too flat, or include an additional scene that doesn’t add much (I’m raising my hand on that latter point)
- use too many words to superfluously describe something technically
- or describe a technical matter badly
- have POV errors galore
- write plot holes
Step 3: Editor receives draft. Pretends he’s a proofreader and issues minor edits. Smiles and pats everyone on the back. Yay! Good job!
Step 4: …Editor suddenly remembers he’s an editor and the publisher. Transforms into Mr. Asshyde and starts tearing into the drafts. Process involves:
- staring with total disbelief at a scene involving software security or medical operations that even a Hollywood writer would laugh at
- researching appropriate details about said technical matters and rewriting section
- wondering why the last two hours were blown making one single page look correct
- cussing such profanity that would make a sailor blush
- pondering what happened to that massive wound the main character received just one minute ago
- privately wishing your own stories received this degree of abusive love
- stopping pronoun juggling
- consoling yourself with alcohol because you aren’t getting paid extra for this
- finishing the last page and firing it to the writer, while finally understanding every story rejection you’ve personally ever received
Step 5: Editor wonders why people hate him.
I feel it takes frank honesty to transform a story one notch better than what it was. And I admit that fear is powering many of my decisions: if the series isn’t addictive, people will put it down. Great writing should be smooth, balanced between the eye opening and the jaw dropping, and leave readers hungry for more.
If your audience stops reading, they won’t talk about it. And that kind of silence is death.
And this is a factor that’s going to get tougher for me, because I have rapport with the five guys I’m working alongside. Outliers is a shared-universe, not another book series. Generally authors rarely allow others to develop in their literary universes, but the franchise nature changes the dynamic considerably.
Fellow authors whom I show our releases to swiftly pop the question, “Can I submit to this? When’s the open submission window?” And the reason I cannot give direct answers is because there’s a vision, a direction that the series is going.
Outliers is a road, and I hesitate because any writers joining us for the journey have to be prepared. Some are being readied even now, others are coming in time.